Veylian One-Shot (My First Fic)
Jul. 28th, 2014 06:55 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
yummydonut1202I was building, and this just popped into my head. It may be terrible, but it is my first fic! Feel free to tell me what I did wrong so I can fix it! Hope you enjoy!
Aurey ran as fast as she could through the night, knowing there was not much time left.
She stopped, out of breath, and looked around desperately for a place to hide herself. After looking all around her, she thought she heard something behind her, so she leapt and hid behind a rosebush. She figured the red in her hair would (hopefully) blend in with the roses so she wouldn't be too obvious.
Her heart started racing as she heard footsteps, and despite her nervousness causing her to tremble, she tried to remain completely still. Then, she glanced up, and about 6 feet away from her was her pursuer. She watched as the tall, lanky mapmaker searched the area, trying to find her. He probably knew she was close, and as Aurey was trying to concentrate and not move, she felt a sneeze coming on.
Panicking, she tried to find a way to muffle the noise, for if he heard her, she knew she would be eliminated immediately. She sneezed whilst holding her nose, and to her luck, it made little noise. She sighed to herself in relief, and Vechs seemed to give up on this area and move on.
She watched him walk away until she couldn't see him any more, and relaxed a little. She contemplated whether she should try to find somewhere else to hide, but decided against in just in case he was still in the area.
After a few minutes of waiting, she stiffened up as she heard rustling behind her. She didn't dare look because she didn't want to cause any movement. "OhIhopethatisn'thimpleasedon'tlethimseemeohgoshno," she thought when suddenly she saw a shadow right on top of her and the rose bush was moved over to see a grinning man looking down on her with green goggles, and though she couldn't see his eyes, she knew they had an evil look in them. "I found you Rel Rel..." he said as he grabbed her.
=x=
"That was really fun," said Vechs as he and Aureylian walked from the B-Team bakery, each holding a cake. "Yeah, we should totally play Hide 'n Seek around spawn more often!" Aurey agreed as they walked back to her base to build yet another rainbow thing on the MindCrack server. </cut>
So that was my first attempt at fan-fiction, hopefully I got the cut right, and it wasn't too terrible! (Oh and this takes place on the season 4 server in case anyone was wondering.)
Aurey ran as fast as she could through the night, knowing there was not much time left.
She stopped, out of breath, and looked around desperately for a place to hide herself. After looking all around her, she thought she heard something behind her, so she leapt and hid behind a rosebush. She figured the red in her hair would (hopefully) blend in with the roses so she wouldn't be too obvious.
Her heart started racing as she heard footsteps, and despite her nervousness causing her to tremble, she tried to remain completely still. Then, she glanced up, and about 6 feet away from her was her pursuer. She watched as the tall, lanky mapmaker searched the area, trying to find her. He probably knew she was close, and as Aurey was trying to concentrate and not move, she felt a sneeze coming on.
Panicking, she tried to find a way to muffle the noise, for if he heard her, she knew she would be eliminated immediately. She sneezed whilst holding her nose, and to her luck, it made little noise. She sighed to herself in relief, and Vechs seemed to give up on this area and move on.
She watched him walk away until she couldn't see him any more, and relaxed a little. She contemplated whether she should try to find somewhere else to hide, but decided against in just in case he was still in the area.
After a few minutes of waiting, she stiffened up as she heard rustling behind her. She didn't dare look because she didn't want to cause any movement. "OhIhopethatisn'thimpleasedon'tlethimseemeohgoshno," she thought when suddenly she saw a shadow right on top of her and the rose bush was moved over to see a grinning man looking down on her with green goggles, and though she couldn't see his eyes, she knew they had an evil look in them. "I found you Rel Rel..." he said as he grabbed her.
=x=
"That was really fun," said Vechs as he and Aureylian walked from the B-Team bakery, each holding a cake. "Yeah, we should totally play Hide 'n Seek around spawn more often!" Aurey agreed as they walked back to her base to build yet another rainbow thing on the MindCrack server. </cut>
So that was my first attempt at fan-fiction, hopefully I got the cut right, and it wasn't too terrible! (Oh and this takes place on the season 4 server in case anyone was wondering.)
